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[7592] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 185 | Time: 3h 28m

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Brentos @ Tuesday, January 7th 2014, 4:40 AM

The last panel is supposed to be like in a sit-com or something I guess...

Waccoon @ Wednesday, January 8th 2014, 4:22 AM

Why am I always the last to know anything? :boohoo:

Every speared, dead, fake angel hung from a tree needs a laugh track!

[7591] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 184 | Time: 3h 47m

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Brentos @ Saturday, January 4th 2014, 6:07 AM

Alright the holidays are over so all you fucking JERKS start drawing shit again. It's time for work so get to it.

[7587] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 183 | Time: 4h 26m

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Brentos @ Saturday, January 4th 2014, 1:42 AM

I'm thinking of changing the 9th and 10th panels, I mean it's christmas for Christ's sake!

Sakana_Katana @ Saturday, December 21st 2013, 3:41 PM

If you must change anything, take the apostrophe out of "AK-47's," as it's used for the possessive; not the plural.

Brentos @ Sunday, December 22nd 2013, 12:11 AM

The way I did it is actually correct even though it might not look correct. From Essentials of English Grammar by L. Sue Baugh:

The apostrophe or 's is used to form the plural of letters, numbers, signs, symbols, and words referred to as words.
Examples:

All the R's in this article were printed backwards.
Your 3's look like 8's.
How many and's can you put in one sentence?

Now if you want to see some really bad grammar or spelling check out my early Deazle Weasel comics! I've got mistakes all over those pages. But having said all that everybody feel free to point out any mistakes, contradictions, parts of the story line that don't make sense etc in my comics. I really dig feedback like Sakana's :gamer:

Sakana_Katana @ Monday, December 23rd 2013, 9:38 PM

I could cite equally lengthy examples that prove MY point but, will spare the readers as, anyone can find same by googling (Yeah, I "verbed" a noun. Boo yaah!) on his own.

In a short survey of grammar sites, I now think the real difference in correctness, based on the times, is how old the stylebook or, one's education. Guess I'm just "Old School."

pinderhooks @ Monday, December 23rd 2013, 11:47 PM

I bet reading this here comic is what killed old man Kalashnikov :lol:

Brentos @ Tuesday, December 24th 2013, 3:57 PM

Fuckin English! :crazy:

I looked up some different sites and yes there are differing opinions about this. I always like to refer to my book because it covers everything I've ever needed to look up and is arranged in such a handy way for finding out what I need to know in seconds. One of the reasons I like the book so much is that the author avoids complicating the rules with 'use this rule for bla bla *except* for when *this* happens and sometimes that'... She just says "here's the rule it covers all that".

Monster Grammar has a tip saying that if there's any chance of confusing the reader then go for it and put in the apostrophe. I run into these kind of things quite a bit because comics traditionally use all capital letters for text. Grammar rules were never meant to take into consideration lowly comics, at least as far as I know. If I typed it out AK-47s would be way easier for the reader than AK-47S so I was glad to see my book said I could throw in the apostrophe. (I originally wanted Balki to say it like AK without the 47 which is how I normally refer to that type of gun, it could have looked like this: ANGELS THAT PACK AKS AREN'T LEGIT. I could go on and on you know me.

I did go on and on because personally I love conversations like this and lots of us make comics so I think it's relevant for us to improving our 'aht'. In fact Sakana, I even consider those unique photo/puppet montage things you do to be comics in a sense so yeah, whether you think so or not I consider you to be a fellow comics artist. We used to have conversations like this on the VCL forum. I really miss those days. I'm on pain killers right now and yeah hopefully this was the last thing Mr Kalishnikov ever read. I bet he was a Deep Thinking Pervert.

Tha_Pig @ Wednesday, December 25th 2013, 11:11 AM

AK-47s aren't legit. They are actually AKMs.

Brentos @ Saturday, January 4th 2014, 2:07 AM

Changes made: I like this way better without the burning corpse hanging in the middle of your camp kinda thing. I mean that would really ruin the moment. I'd have to get the fuck out of there and since Ken's incapacitated he'd have to stay. It would have made for some comedy if Ken woke up by himself with nothing but a burnt body to greet him in the morning though. He'd be all like "what the fuck? I miss all the excitement...". But I wasn't planning on Ken getting separated from everyone else.

Pig: I'm going to keep writing AK-47 only because that's what most people will know. (I was always under the impression that AKM's were a certain model of the AK. And since I didn't know otherwise it's not likely Balki would know that because she's a girl.)

Brentos @ Saturday, January 4th 2014, 2:25 AM

Fuck! I forgot to draw the spear! I'll change that later that's my god damn resolution FUCK I hate going back to change shit fuck.

Tha_Pig @ Saturday, January 11th 2014, 3:05 PM

Yeah the AKM is the modified version of the original AK-47, but anyways I was just trying to make a silly comment that went with the comic... Not trying to turn this into a lecture about weapons. If I did, I make sure is illustrated and contains all kinds of porn.

Sakana_Katana @ Sunday, January 19th 2014, 1:01 AM

To quote from Monty Python: "And there's one scene where I swear you can see everything but, my mate says it's just the way he's holding the spear." Except, I don't see the spear.

[7574] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 182 | Time: 4h 41m

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Brentos @ Tuesday, December 17th 2013, 2:29 AM

Bumped because of the delay...

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Calli @ Friday, December 6th 2013, 11:40 AM

this reminds me of a lead up to brawl. Those were good days.

Sydney @ Tuesday, December 17th 2013, 6:44 PM

Oh my god I REMEMBER THE BRAWL! Fuck I miss those days.

[7586] Artist: Brentos | Title: It Was Better Than Anyone Could Have Imagined | Time: 31m 28s

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Brentos @ Monday, December 16th 2013, 11:26 PM

I've actually been sick for like two months here! I haven't even been listening to music! One could argue that I've always been sick though I suppose.

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Tha_Pig @ Wednesday, December 18th 2013, 9:58 PM

Dicks... dicks everywhere!

Brentos @ Sunday, December 22nd 2013, 12:17 AM

Dancing disco dicks.

pinderhooks @ Monday, December 23rd 2013, 11:43 PM

Am I correct in assuming that this is the first appearance of dick-nipples on this board? And if so, what took so long, eh?

Brentos @ Tuesday, December 24th 2013, 4:20 PM

I'm trying to think back and even checked most of the archives. This could really be the first documented case of dick nipples here. Free aht to whoever draws the first SHITTING dick nipples! ( I regret this already. Should I hit submit or should I not?) Actually what am I afraid of? No one has ever drawn shitting dick nipples.

Irrelevant @ Tuesday, January 21st 2014, 8:52 PM

This is amazing

[7570] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 181 | Time: 4h 32m

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Brentos @ Saturday, October 26th 2013, 5:35 AM

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Coon @ Sunday, November 3rd 2013, 1:12 PM

Oh great, Wac has to talk about jerking off on a bible JUST when there's a gun-toting angel overhead. Well, I guess he couldn't have known, what with his eyes covered. This is getting exciting!

[7566] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 180 | Time: 3h 44m

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Brentos @ Saturday, October 19th 2013, 5:28 AM

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Sakana_Katana @ Friday, October 25th 2013, 2:06 AM

You gonna finish this or, are the blank panels a stylistic thing, like a pictorial ellipsis?

Brentos @ Saturday, October 26th 2013, 4:10 AM

Page finished. What happens next is anybody's guess.

Brentos @ Thursday, October 31st 2013, 10:41 PM

http://CodeWelt.com/proj/speak?lang=en-us&text=Biologic%20lifeforms%20since%[...]

[7565] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 179 | Time: unknown

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Brentos @ Saturday, October 19th 2013, 2:33 AM

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Brentos @ Thursday, October 31st 2013, 10:51 PM

http://CodeWelt.com/proj/speak?lang=en-us&text=Observe.%20There%20are%20foot[...]

Brentos @ Thursday, October 31st 2013, 11:13 PM

http://www.sitepal.com/ttswidgetdemo?mId=50374688.3

[7563] Artist: Brentos | Title: Bones Germs and Steel | Time: 1h 37m

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Brentos @ Monday, October 14th 2013, 6:12 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eiDeg43ZEGM

Brentos @ Saturday, October 19th 2013, 1:21 AM

Still trying to come up with a way to draw Jazz in a consistent manner. He looks so serious here he does.

Irrelevant @ Friday, November 1st 2013, 2:03 AM

people with bones to pick often do have serious expressions.

[7562] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 178 | Time: 4h 6m

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Brentos @ Thursday, October 10th 2013, 6:16 AM

Sydney dodges a bullet, catches an artillery round...

Tha_Pig @ Tuesday, October 15th 2013, 6:48 PM

Good thing that drawer was alphabetically organized.

Irrelevant @ Friday, November 1st 2013, 2:02 AM

was going to write 'too drunk to read' then i read it, or tried to, then enlarged it, and read it and am glad i did.

love the last panel.

[7557] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 177 | Time: 3h 17m

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Brentos @ Friday, September 27th 2013, 5:15 AM

The hardest characters for me to draw are Sydney and Waccoon. I've been trying to draw Sydney like how Coon drew him recently and I think this looks better than before I hope. For some reason I find Sydney's and Wac's head construction so complex or something. I think it's getting better... Jazz Pirate is hard to draw too.

Sydney @ Friday, September 27th 2013, 3:03 PM

I guess it is kinda hard when you consider they have wider faces, which I attribute to the bone structure of the canine jaw and skull. In all my years of drawing I've never truly pinned it down.

Sydney @ Friday, September 27th 2013, 3:05 PM

And here is my tarp toilet! And my tarp bookcase! And my tarp Cuisinart!

Waccoon @ Sunday, September 29th 2013, 1:32 AM

Sydney's head is difficult because the bridge of the muzzle is flat. It's easier to think of the skull more in the shape of a squirrel than a wolf. Nothing wrong with a unique design, but yeah, it's tricky.

From the front, Wac is actually very easy once you learn the lower curvature of the cheeks. His head is just a full circle. From the side things get tricky because the head makes no sense 3-dimentionally. I bought some modeling clay, and I really should make a proper model one of these days.

Sakana_Katana @ Sunday, September 29th 2013, 4:30 AM

That last panel demands the sound effect of "Dun, dun dunnnnnn!"

Sydney @ Sunday, September 29th 2013, 9:20 AM

Best reference I've found for the head and muzzle is here: http://tinyurl.com/kfzt48q The bridge of it flattens out right between the eyes down to the nose. And if you look here: http://tinyurl.com/ljko7fe I get his cheeks from all the fluff on either side. I'm just more cartoony.

[7553] Artist: Brentos | Title: Lust 176 | Time: 3h 7m

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Brentos @ Thursday, September 19th 2013, 5:02 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6PXmdYYWeMc

Sydney @ Friday, September 20th 2013, 2:34 PM

Brentos @ Friday, September 27th 2013, 12:21 AM

What!... This is an excellent song! This is one of my favourite songs!